Wednesday, 4 January 2012

Film Review - After Feedback



After my peers reviewed my magazine review, the only criticism I seemed to receive was that the background made it a bit boring. Therefore, I found this copyright free image on the internet and used it as the background to my review. 

I definitely feel that it's lightened the review and made it less formal, but still keeping it smart looking.

Film Poster - After Feedback




Although the majority of the poster remains the same, I edited the positioning of the actor name as well as adding a little review above the stars and the word "Introducing" above the name.


These edits followed due to the peer feedback I go on my poster, suggesting that a bit more information needed to be added to the poster. 

Wednesday, 28 December 2011

Poster & Review Feedback

Poster    Average mark:  8.3/10

I was really pleased with the feedback I got for my film poster. There were many positive remarks along with some good constructive critisism.

The main comments made about my poster were that more information was needed, such as production company logos, who rated it and who Harry Wainwright is. I totally agree with these comments, thinking that I needed some of these before I got feedback on it.

The other comments that cam eup a few times were that they really liked the incorrect spelling of the words in the title and that I had edited it and used Photoshop really well.


Review    Average mark 8/10

Again, I was extremely happy with the feedback I got and agree with all that was said. The comment that came up mutiple times was that the white background was a little bit boring and simple, so I will definitely change this.

The positive comments that I got were primarily that the layout look like a real film review and that they really liked that I'd included a screenshot from the film as the main image rather than just the poster.

Tuesday, 13 December 2011

Film Poster - Before Feedback

This is my film poster for my mockumentary "Confeshions of a grammer junky". I'm rather pleased with how it came out. The Photoshop practise we had definitely helped me when producing theis image. 

I decided to not use lots of colour as I don't feel Gordon's life is all that colourful, especially considering he is always reading newspapers which are primarily black and white. However the oranges is not only used to catch the attention, but it can also connote the enthusiasm and determination that Gordon feels towards correct grammar.